i miss the sounds of ocean waves
memories,
your back leaning against the railing of the boat
blue green waters parting
as the ship moves towards the open arms of the shore
i am mesmorized
your open smile
dark hair blowing back
open body
open seas
moving closer
embracing our life, our love
oh yeah! this is so warm and welcoming!
ReplyDeleteVery nice sounds in this one. :)
ReplyDeleteIf I was to crit anything I would say ditch the small 'i'. A personal pet peeve. I hate the buggers in Poetry.But this is such a beautiful serene read, making one feel so calm. Lovely, you. Just lovely.
ReplyDeletegreat imagery!
ReplyDeleteOh i love this...so languid and yet the brevity really hits the spot!
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