Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Untitled II

the ground was wet when you found me
it was the growing season
like a seed you planted me deep inside your earth
you provided me nourishment
for my mind
my heart
kindess to my soul
then you planted yourself next to me
as we intertwined
bore fruit
our roots and trunks parallel
together we provide shade
together we provide shelter
together we are one.

7 comments:

  1. I did not want to be the first to comment but I must say this is an excellent bit of poetry. Not long should it remain without a name - it is sexy, it is life, and it is beautiful.

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  2. This is wonderful Suz - I really like the imagery very much! Marty is correct it is sexy and life and beautiful!

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  3. thank you Cat & Shadow for your positive comments regarding my blogs.

    smiles,

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  4. I am impressed with your poetry! I absolutely love this one. Oh, please keep writing and posting more! Your sense of rhythm is impeccable. I would love to hear you read!

    Thank you for visiting my blog. :)

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